Jeff—Saturday
I
feel as if I’m playing second fiddle to Jascha Heifetz and Itzhak Perlman,
which I guess isn’t a bad thing when you come right down to it. Perhaps even a
bit propitious, since Heifetz once lived on Mykonos not far from where I live
today. But the bottom line truth is that
my fiddler analogy is a guilt-ridden effort on my part to justify my shameless
piggybacking on the hard work of two other maestros, purely for the purpose of
giving me more time to pack for my return to the States tomorrow after five
months away.
The
guy in the photo at the top of this post goes by the name Tim Hallinan, and
he’s written a seminal two-part dissertation on the timeless Hatfield and McCoy-like
feud obtaining between arbiters of all things literary and the crime writing
community. Each of us has our stories of
run-ins on that subject, but Tim ties it all together. Then there’s maestro Stanley Trollip of
Michael Stanley fame, who posted Part One of Tim’s work here on Thursday, together
with a introduction that I dare not attempt to duplicate. Instead, I wholeheartedly
recommend that if you haven’t yet read Part One and Stan’s introduction you do
so now, before reading any further.
Don’t
worry, we’ll be here patiently waiting for you to get back…though Tim might be
tapping his foot a bit until you return.
Welcome
back. Here’s Tim.
Tim's new Junior Bender, coming in November |
As the title suggests, this post is sort
of a sequel. If you haven’t read Part One and think you might like to, it’s
back there somewhere.
When I ran out of steam last time, I was
getting into two of the things I blame for the low esteem with which some
people regard mysteries and thrillers. One was the universal human need to find
someone or something to look down on The other is the term “whodunnit” and what
it implies.
The problem, on a platter |
And I’ll go out on a limb here and say
that I think “Murder on the Orient Express” is a perfect book of its kind, and
that I don’t actually like books of its kind. And by that, I mean books in
which “whodunnit” is actually the most important thing in the story. Books in
which a puzzle, rather than people, is what matters.
The usual suspects |
A murder―any act of violence―needs
to be taken seriously. These deeds affect people – obviously not just the
victim, but those who loved the victim, who hated the victim, who envied the
victim, who had his or her hopes pinned on the victim. Ultimately, since such
acts have a ripple effect, people who never heard of the victim.
Add captionA world-changer |
An act of violence is an interruption of
everything we planned for, all the assumptions we depended on. It disrupts the
world. It makes it apparent that our hopes are predicated on expectations that
may not be fulfilled, on rules that some people don’t follow, on an instinctive
belief in a prevailing underlying justice that may not actually exist. An act
of violence, a murder, creates a crisis. And what happens in a crisis is that character
reveals itself.
I would argue that the revelation of
character, of holding a human being up to the light to see how he or she works
– where she is strong or weak or admirable or loathsome or flexible or rigid or
holy or profane – is the primary function of fiction.
What’s most interesting to me about all
this is that murder and violence – physical or emotional violence – have been
used to reveal character and propel events forward in literature all over the
world, from the very beginning. What’s Homer writing about? War and survival.
The Book of Genesis takes us straight to a murder, Cain’s
killing of Abel, and its repercussions. The greatest of Sophocles’ plays,
“Oedipus Rex,” is a detective story with a twist, which is that the central
character turns out to be the murderer. When Agatha Christie did precisely that
in The Murder of Roger Ackroyd in 1926, it caused a minor sensation
even though Sophocles had already pulled it off almost 2400 years earlier. To
look at the Middle Ages, Beowulf is a straight-ahead thriller, a
portrait of a society suspended, being held for ransom by violence until
someone—some hero—will step forward and take action.
A classic example of serious literature
using murder as the microscope for character is “Hamlet.”
A boy and his skull |
“Hamlet” presents a classic setup: a man
has been killed, and the job of finding the murderer and punishing him falls to
the victim’s son. In fact, this situation has been used so often that it’s
become a trope, one modern definition of which is “a story concept
that the audience will recognize and understand instantly.”
But in Shakespeare’s hands, the murder
investigation leads us into all sorts of issues: the primacy of kings, the
relationship between mother and son, the betrayal of friendship, the
immeasurable value of honest friendship, the fragility of young love, the
soul-sickness of the murderer, the eternal question of what sometimes keeps us
from doing what we need to do even when the path seems clear.
At two points, Claudius’s failed prayer
and the “To be or not to be” soliloquy, it takes us into regions like the
silence of God, the relationship between God and the human soul, and the
uncertainty of the afterlife. Big stuff. And all of it arises naturally from
fascinating, deeply felt characters who are responding to the old-testament
blunt weapon of murder.
And after Shakespeare has put us inside
these characters’ hearts and souls for hours―so deeply that Elsinore Castle
becomes―the whole universe, at the end, when everyone is dead or dying, he
brings in someone new and untouched by the mystery, Fortinbras, to survey the
dead, frown at the disorderly throne room, assert a shaky claim to authority,
and order that the word of these terrible events be spread far and wide, and
now let’s get to work. We’ve got a country to run.
Fortinbras rolls up his sleeves and dusts off his crown |
.At that precise moment the bodies on the
stage – Hamlet, Gertrude, Claudius, the others – who have been our world for
hours, are just litter to be cleared away to make room for the new orde
We’re witnessing the restoration of order,
which was Shakespeare’s great theme, whether the play is a comedy, tragedy,
history, or one of the very complex late works that scholars, for lack of a
better term, call “problem plays.” Whatever genre (there’s that word again) the
play represents, in the first act we learn what’s wrong with the world it
depicts, and the end of the fifth act, order has been restored
And that is absolutely what happens
in a crime novel, whether it’s a thriller or a mystery. The reader enters a
world that’s about to be broken or has just been broken. It’s out of kilter.
It’s stopped working the way we believe our world should work. The characters
of the people on the page are being stretched thin enough to become
transparent; motives and enmities and love are suddenly made visible. The
primary course of action of a mystery or a thriller is repairing that broken
world and exploring those exposed characters, restoring both to some kind of
acceptable balance. It may be retribution, it may be the revelation of the
truth. The denouement may be thrilling or comic or tragic. Depends on the book.
But at the end of the story – unless it’s noir – there will be some form of
restoration.
Question mark or fish hook? |
The reason that kind of exploration and
illumination work so well in the whodunnit and the thriller is that each of
them plants a question mark at the very beginning – in “Hamlet,” the opening
words are “Who’s there?” called out by a terrified guard who’s asking the
question that’s really being asked throughout the play. Who’s behind that mask?
Who’s beneath that crown? Who’s wearing that smile? Who is that man
who was pretending to love me?
The whodunnit and the thriller take that
question mark and plant it right there in the first act. It may or may not be a
coincidence that a question mark looks like a fish hook, because what the
question mark does is hook the reader and pull him or her across 100,000 words
or so to see what the answer is, and—more important—what happens as we get
closer to it.
And that fish hook has to drag the reader upstream because as he
or she sits there, nose to the type, the real world is flowing by. People take
a break from their lives to read, and writers should never forget that. A
reader with the book open is like a rock in a stream: life is flowing past,
carrying with it lots of things that compete for the reader’s attention, and
some of them will only go by once. I think we owe the reader something in our
book that makes that commitment of time and energy and attention worthwhile.
So that means the books have to be about
something that goes beyond whodunnit. On a purely personal note
and from a writer’s perspective, I can testify that there’s probably not a
theme in the world that can’t be explored in a thriller or a whodunit, not a
society, not a culture, not a business.
These are essentially investigative forms
– there’s almost always a character whose primary function is to ask questions,
and in such a story there’s pretty much nothing you can’t open up and put a
microscope to. In a modest way, when I attempt to frame such a story I feel
that I’m following in the tracks of hundreds and hundreds of talented writers
who sat down day after day to write the best book they possibly could – to make
the reading experience worthwhile for the people who open the book – in both
literary fiction and genre fiction. Detective fiction and thrillers have
deepened and broadened to include characters who are deeper than the page,
predicaments that are more than puzzles, revelations that reflect our own
lives. I believe that some of the best writers of the past century have worked
and are working in what’s still called genre fiction, and they know that the
question is not, and never really has been, “whodunnit?” It’s “what happened?”
and “to whom?” and “what does this show me about my world?”
Far as I’m concerned, those are real
books.
So there.
Tim—in for Jeff
Bravo! Bravo! Encore! Not that we were getting tired of that second fiddle. But order must be broken before it can be restored. And besides, all of the writers here are first fiddles in my book...
ReplyDeleteAhh, Everett -- where would I be without you? My only regret is that there's only one of you. And, yes, this is a splendid and generous group of writers.
DeleteDon't despair. The New York Times believes in genre fiction.
ReplyDeleteYes, to the extent of one roundup review on every ninth Thursday or something like that. Not that I'm not thrilled to be included.
DeleteNo offense to traditional mystery (cozy) readers and writers, but this is why I don't read them. All they care about is the puzzle, when what's important needs to be the people.
ReplyDeleteDana, there are a lot of traditional and cozy mysteries (two different things) that focus on the people in them and how the murder affects them. If you picked some of them up, you might be surprised.
DeleteGood point, well made, Tim.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Zoe. Much appreciated.
DeleteTim, You've said it as well as it can be said. Applause, applause, applause.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Earl -- that means a lot, coming from you.
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ReplyDeleteYou're toooo funny. :)
ReplyDeleteFrom Annamaria: Tim, What Earl said. This essay is BRILLIANT! For me a Bardolator cum crime writer, I want to memorize it!
ReplyDeleteThanks, my dear anonymous Annamaria. This has been simmering inside me for years and years.
DeleteI translated his Arabic. It's the name of some company which I will not do him the favor of rendering in English.
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