Way back before most music came as a downloaded or streamed digital file, it took physical form in the shape of vinyl records, tape cassettes, and then compact discs. My favourite albums were always those that offered something more than a list of the tracks and which members of the band played which instruments on the recording.
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| music with added lyrics Photo courtesy of Pixabay |
I loved the sleeve notes. The extra bits. Like the lyrics to every song, or—if the artist was singing their own material—notes on where each song was written, and why.
Likewise, when it comes to movies, I love the extras there, too.
I had to severely downsize my DVD collection when I made my last house move. The movies I kept tended to be the Special Editions—the ones with a second disc containing bonus features such as a director’s commentary, a making-of documentary, deleted scenes, outtakes, and explanations of the stunts or special effects. I’ve even been known to buy a second copy if it came with some/better/more extras.
One of those repeat buys was my all-time favourite movie, Ronin, a John Frankenheimer-directed Euro-thriller starring Robert De Niro, Jean Reno, Natascha McElhone, Stellan Skarsgård, Sean Bean, and Jonathan Pryce (making a far better villain here than he ever managed in his Brosnan/Bond outing, Tomorrow Never Dies.)
I watched Ronin again recently with an actor friend. We’d both seen it before, so we switched on the subtitles to keep up with the dialogue, and played the Frankenheimer commentary over the top. It was a brilliant example of tight storytelling and character development done with a few deft brushstrokes.
And also a timely reminder of a great thriller set in France, which just so happens to be where the section of the Charlie Fox novel I’m working on at the moment takes place.
So, no pressure, then…
Watching the movie again and listening to the commentary made me think about the mechanics of the story I’m writing. It also made me wonder if readers would be interested in those inner workings.
There seems to have been a trend away from putting in a lot of extra material at the end of ebooks, mainly because of the ‘percentage read’ indicator. People are sometimes put out if the book ends at, say, 80% because there’s so much other stuff included. So, while I am going to offer some additional insight into the story, I think it might be better to do so in the form of links to pages on my website instead.
So, when it comes to Bonus Features for a book, what would you be interested in reading? The story behind the story—what inspired the book? Or how the plot developed from the initial idea to the full outline? Would you like pictures of any real locations used? Or notes about the factual research woven into the fictional story?
All suggestions gratefully received!
This week’s Word of the Week is assonance, meaning the resemblance of sound between syllables of nearby words, particularly from the rhyming of two or more stressed vowels, such as ‘it’s hot and it’s monotonous’ (Sondheim) or from the use of consonants that are identical but with different vowels, such as sculled, scold, skilled. It can be used to invoke feeling or mood in prose or poetry.
Upcoming events:
CRIME & PUBLISHMENT—The Mill Forge, Gretna
Workshops on Getting Your Fight Scenes Right
Caro Ramsay is also teaching at this event—Breaking Bones For Fun
May 9-12
CRIMEFEST INTERNATIONAL CRIME FICTION CONVENTION—Mercure Bristol Grand Hotel, Bristol
Various panels, TBA, although I am once again moderating The Indie Alternative on Sunday morning, May 12



